March
22
Under the Porch
My life is like
Flowers
To represent memories
Emotions
Life, death, envy,
Forgiveness
Daffodils in the garden
Hardy, punctual, and graceful.
Forget-me-nots running along the creek beds in summer,
Whirling, curling, like the smoke of a cigarette
Lilies in the pond
Dandelions in the long vein like cracks, forcing open the asphalt
Lilacs in the road
Tulips under the porch,
Under the porch is
Bruised knees,
Its moss,
It’s the mud
Its life, its death
It’s a hawk, it’s a dove
It’s the promise of spring
Flowers wrapped up in twine
Under the porch.
Its cigarette butts
Its a beer can
It’s the steps in the hall
It’s a muddy, mess of flowers,
Wrapped up in twine,
Forgotten Under the porch.
Wow – powerful use of figurative language to communicate the deeper meaning about the moments spent under the porch.
I really enjoyed your writing and the creativity you brought to it. It really allowed me to envision what every word meant and painted a picture in my head.
the figurative language really ties me in and i really love the thought you put into this.