March 22

Under the Porch

My life is like

Flowers

To represent memories

Emotions

Life, death, envy, 

Forgiveness

 

Daffodils in the garden

Hardy, punctual, and graceful.

 

Forget-me-nots running along the creek beds in summer, 

Whirling, curling, like the smoke of a cigarette

 

Lilies in the pond

Dandelions in the long vein like cracks, forcing open the asphalt

Lilacs in the road

 

Tulips under the porch,

Under the porch is

Bruised knees, 

Its moss,

It’s the mud

 

Its life, its death

It’s a hawk, it’s a dove

It’s the promise of spring

 

Flowers wrapped up in twine

Under the porch.

Its cigarette butts

Its a beer can

It’s the steps in the hall

 

It’s a muddy, mess of flowers,

Wrapped up in twine,

Forgotten Under the porch. 


Posted March 22, 2024 by mishamu in category Memory Writing

3 thoughts on “Under the Porch

  1. msvirgin

    Wow – powerful use of figurative language to communicate the deeper meaning about the moments spent under the porch.

    Reply
  2. aliafor

    I really enjoyed your writing and the creativity you brought to it. It really allowed me to envision what every word meant and painted a picture in my head.

    Reply

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