I love how your wording gives me a good visual as to what innocence is. I like the repetition with the “Each chapter is” as it goes into talking about growth. Something I noticed ia how the first stanza starts with garden and then each stanza after that mentions flowers so it kind of always goes back to the garden mentioned. I noticed the point of view of the poem is first person and if it ended up being 3rd person, the reader would’ve been able to get a more in depth look into the persons mind. I think the poem is set before spring officially starts and it’s still a little cold until spring officially starts.
I really liked the rhyme and imagery you used.
I love how your wording gives me a good visual as to what innocence is. I like the repetition with the “Each chapter is” as it goes into talking about growth. Something I noticed ia how the first stanza starts with garden and then each stanza after that mentions flowers so it kind of always goes back to the garden mentioned. I noticed the point of view of the poem is first person and if it ended up being 3rd person, the reader would’ve been able to get a more in depth look into the persons mind. I think the poem is set before spring officially starts and it’s still a little cold until spring officially starts.