December
19
End of the World
For Next Time
I look up at the sky and watch the shuttle disappear into the clouds. I had put the people I love before myself, and now I’m paying the price. “Something to think about for next time,” I chuckle to myself before turning to face the asteroid racing towards earth, watching it grow bigger and bigger.
Her Final Minutes
I press my face to the window in an attempt to get one last glimpse at my sister. I repeatedly wipe the fog off the window that keeps forming due to my heavy breaths against the glass. I break down crying as I realized she had spent her final minutes on earth saving my life.
i liked how you broke it up into two parts, especially her final moments.
I like how even though they are apart both of them acknowledge the fact that she saved her life.
I really like the description you gave to the story.
I liked how you put both of their perspectives into the story.
This is so good. The pictures add a special touch that allowed me to get a full understanding of what’s going on. I like that you show two different perspectives.
I like the different perspectives on the events that are happening. It shows how the two are feeling about what’s going on
I really liked the way you wrote this. I liked the descriptiveness.
This made me so sad, and the pictures created a better image of what happened!
I love how the two different perspectives come together to create a stronger message and a more complete picture. You did a lot with so few words – well done!