This is so beautifully written, I love how the poem doesn’t make complete sense and I don’t think its suppoused to. The reader is suppoused to interpret the poem for his or herself.
My heart is broken! I love how you wove the love poem into a sad story. Your poetic voice is so strong and moving in this piece! Please consider publishing in more places!
I liked the rhyming scheme that you put into the poem.
I like the repetition of ‘baby’ – it’s super impactful.
This is so beautifully written, I love how the poem doesn’t make complete sense and I don’t think its suppoused to. The reader is suppoused to interpret the poem for his or herself.
My heart is broken! I love how you wove the love poem into a sad story. Your poetic voice is so strong and moving in this piece! Please consider publishing in more places!